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Friday, September 23, 2011

Reel story


My first attempt at 55 Fiction....

She could hear the curtains ruffling,  there was definitely someone else, an entity….. She moved up the stairs looking for something to protect herself… no sooner had she gone upstairs than a loud crash echoed in the living room…


Shaking, she opened her tightly shut eyes to view the next scene …..




P:S - I never thought i could write something so short... lol.. hope it makes sense ...

14 comments:

  1. Good twist in the end, perfect 55 fiction, has all the elements...:)

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  2. Liked it.. :)
    Well written in limited words...
    I too had tried it, four segments of 50 words each to give out a complete story,

    http://insanemoviegeek.blogspot.com/2011/09/last-job.html

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  3. @ Saru : yeaaa, thankyou :)

    @Vinay : thank you ... hmmmm now thats surely worth a read... :)

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  4. hehe, can try it for advertisements... good try and i dint check the length of scroll bar, i imagined it to be a page length :P :P

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  5. @ Deepak Karthik : lol, advertisements..mmm yep yep..:P... lol.. u got a good sense of humor there.. :)

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  6. That was simple, short but catchy!
    Good one!

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  7. A good one.You may like to say my 55WF in my blog.There are quite a few

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  8. @ Red handed ; Thank you ... :)
    @ KParthasarathi : Thank you , i read the ones you had written, they are too good :)

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  9. Nice one.....So much of detailings in it ........... Superb!!!

    I too like short stories,do visit mine.:)

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  10. @ Arjun : Thank you.... id definitely do that :)

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  11. hahaha...definitely makes sense... :)

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  12. wow.. that is nice! keep writing more!

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  13. @ kp: thankyouuu ... id surely try writing more :)

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