He was waiting for her....... She glided into the room, and sat
down gently. They exchanged smiles, it was the perfect moment... She was ready...She could feel his eager breath...
“Open your mouth… aaahhhh now that’s a cavity you got there”
@ Red Handed : ;).. aaahhh who dsnt ... lol ... @ Deeps: lol :) ... @ Kp : thank you :) @ Saru : hahahahha .. yea actually :P ... am happy you liked it :) ..Thankyou so much ..:)
Looooool..gahahhaha i was expecting sumthing steamy.lol.
ReplyDeletedishum…dishum..pepsodent will be good :P
ReplyDeleteHe he that was good!
ReplyDeleteHonestly, it's like in the Johny Johny rhyme...'Open your moth, hahaha'...I enjoyed it. You're good with 55 fiction...
ReplyDelete@ Red Handed : ;).. aaahhh who dsnt ... lol ...
ReplyDelete@ Deeps: lol :) ...
@ Kp : thank you :)
@ Saru : hahahahha .. yea actually :P ... am happy you liked it :) ..Thankyou so much ..:)
:D rotflmao
ReplyDelete*Reads again*
:D rotflmao
LOL.. Simpl(e)y funny! :)
ReplyDelete@ PeeVee : :D..;)
ReplyDelete@ Raj : Thank you :)
LOL!
ReplyDeleteThat is the one of the enjoyable funny 55 fiction I ever read.
ReplyDeleteExcellent.....
You are becoming a maestro in this format.
Cheers
@ Blasphemous Aesthete : :)
ReplyDelete@ Arjun Ms : Thankyou so much....
lol!! eager breath! i was like..tinuchee..eew!!
ReplyDelete@srmu : :P.. lol.. ehem ;)
ReplyDeletehahahah..lovely
ReplyDelete: phatichar : thank you
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