I thought I
would miss your absence
But your
presence was never endearing
I could
never understand what made me go on
Maybe the idea of being hurt was inviting
I know I don’t want to be with you again
But the
thought of your absence does warm my eyes
In the
loneliness I found myself
The same ‘me’
I lost around you
Your words
had me enticed
I realize
now, that,
Words have
a surreal effect
If not
matched with actions
They become
hollow,
Like you…..
The conflicting confusion has been poetically expressed very well. good one!
ReplyDeletewow!! xactly my felling... so beautifully painted with the colours of words... loved it sis...
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Niya
A loss of thought or judgement in a relationship leaves you in a lurch. Profound poem, excellent play of words..
ReplyDeleteLove these lines
ReplyDelete" I know I don’t want to be with you again,
But the thought of your absence does warm my eyes"
Sounds familiar ..!
PS: like thy words :)
@ Dee : Thankyou :)
ReplyDelete@ Niya : thankyou niya, "so beautifully painted with the clor of words" wow, i like that one :)
@ Saru :it definitely does, and yes what better way to express than here :), thankyou for liking it:)
@ Reicha : i dnt know they'd be famous so soon :P .. thankyou :)
awesome..:-)
ReplyDeleteExquisitely written. You have your way with words.
ReplyDelete"The same ‘me’ I lost around you" - Loved the line!
@ rahul : thanku :)
ReplyDelete@ Raj : hmmm.... i always thought they eluded me - "words" .. but thankyou for your comments :)
ouch....sharp...
ReplyDeleteso u broke your wings and found yourself?
beautifully expressed :)
@ SUB : broke my wings, but have to find myself :) .. .. thankyou :)
ReplyDeleteawwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is simply mindblowing! ur best poem yet!!!
ReplyDeletemmmmuuuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!
@ Srmu : really??? veee.. thankuuuuuu :) ...
ReplyDeleteEven after knowing its gonna hurt, we continue walking in the direction that has no destination. you said it so aptly...'inviting the hurt'
ReplyDeleteope the broken wings heal and you soar once again high where sky is the limit... :)
TYPO!!! I don't like them... *Hope
ReplyDelete@ beyond horizon : im hoping for the same :) , but yes like you said,'we continue in the direction without a destination'... thank you...:)
ReplyDeleteMaybe the idea of being hurt was inviting...hmm...sounds cool...and loved the way you compared hollowness of words and the person..amazingly written :-)
ReplyDelete@ droopy rose : Thank you so much :)
ReplyDeleteI wonder what's easier? Losing yourself in yourself, or in someone else.
ReplyDeleteAnyway .. what a beauty of a poem! Applauds.
@ Crystal : I think the former is free of hurt , and the latter earns u hurt :)
ReplyDelete*Taking a bow here* :)
the pain & confusion of hurt and bygone days is really visible ... beautifully penned.. :)
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ReplyDelete@ RAchit : Thankyou Rachit ...
ReplyDeletebeautifully confused.Loved it :)
ReplyDeleteI haven't read much on your blog but following you! Will get back here soon and will be visiting often! :)
@Jen : Thank ou dear, that sounds really good :)
DeleteBeautiful portrait of words!!!
ReplyDeleteI have been reading your blog for quite some time. And I would say your writing is perfect when it comes to keep bound the reader till the end. keep the good work up :)
@tlasoi : thankyou so much :)
ReplyDeletehappen to stumble upon ur blog today. Loved the one i read.
ReplyDelete"Maybe the idea of being hurt was inviting" beauty of words.
Well, welcome to my blog, and i must say this, you have commented on one of my fav posts :) .... Glad to see your comment.. keep em comingggg :D
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