Unke baaton ka kuch aisa asar pada humpe, ki hum unke aawaz
main kho gaye,
Na raat ka pata tha, na subah ki,
Samay yuhin humsein aage bhaagti thi...
Meri labon pe sirf hansi thi,
Fursat na mila muskurane se.
Khushi thi aisi,
Ki chehre pe ek damak si aa gayi,
Tumhara yun mujhpe pyaar jatana,
Mujhe bha gayi,
Tumhari roj ki baatein aadat si ho gayi,
Ab intezaar raha un lamhon ki…
Jo tumhare saath guzare they..
Shayad wo vapas na aaye..
Ab sirf aankhein nam ho jaati hai,
Tumhari yaad mein
Tadapti hai tumhari
aawaz sunne ke liye,
Iss dil ko yakeen hai ki tum aaoge ..
Lekin shayad tumhe fursat nahi kisi aur ki bahon se…
shuru ke lines padhne ke baad..aisa lag raha tha..shayad...finally kuch aaya...happy ending jaisa...par afsos... hehe :)
ReplyDeletelekin dil ko yakeen hai ki happy ending aayega ..
Lekin shayad tumhe fursat nahi tragedy ki bahon se…. :)
Lovely and it's beautiful...
ReplyDelete@kunnu- Hey Kunal, nice couplet in the end:)
Call me stupid but i rarely read Hindi. But this milady was beautiful yet simple. I loved it coz it was direct and touched the heart. Emotions perfectly crafted by you in those words. I loved the last line sooooo much. Keep writing! Much love to you.
ReplyDelete@ Kunnu : lol ... kya kare, jaise tumne kaha fursat nahi tragedy ke bahon se :P :)
ReplyDelete@ Saru : thanku so much
@red handed : Thankyou for the read and beautiful feedback :)
kahaan shuru kiya tha, aur kahaan par khatam. ye kya hua?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful post :D
Cheers
Blasphemous Aesthete
@Blasphemous Aesthete : lol ... kya kare hum thode tede mede kisse pasand karte hain :P ... thank you for the read :)
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