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Wednesday, August 08, 2012

Opaque (Part III)




Ronald Pascoe was having a tough time. The third murder made their schedules a bit more crammed up than earlier. Gerald blamed himself for the murder as they were just minutes away from stopping the same, or so he thought.

The cops had a list of people in their mid 40’s with no living relatives, and were just about to talk with Mike Newton when they realized he was missing. A search party was arranged for. He was last seen at the park, 2 days earlier.

A panic stricken call from a woman on her early morning walk had got the cops to the area.

‘I was out for my m..morning w..aa..lk, and usually lassy never runs away… and then she did.. and she started barking… the way you know… it’s was different, and … I saw lassy girl standing few feet away from the ma.. as in corpse .. and the I called … ‘

Ronald turned to Gerald and asked him to have the lady and her dog to be driven back home.

He turned and looked at the corpse. A “U” was drawn on his chest with a sharp instrument. Ronald knew he was missing out on something, the clues he thought. There was something he was definitely missing out. He straightened up and walked towards the outer perimeter and looked around checking for something , anything that he could trace back to the killer. But he couldn’t find anything. Lassy’s paw prints confirmed the woman’s story.

‘Ronny, did you find something’, Gerald called out. Ronald was just about to turn and say no, when something caught his eye. He walked over and saw a small silver shiny object on the damp ground. He picked it up and examined it closely, it seemed to have broken off something, only he had to find out what.

******

“How did it break Ken” Nay pouted, “I had to search high and low for this, and you cannot even take care of it “?

“I.. nay, I .. hmmm.. I’m sorry ,it just broke I’ll fix it up”, he grinned back sheepishly

‘Nay-nay, you should know whom you should hand out gifts to”, Mia added

“Oh c’mon Mia, he said he will fix it wont you, Ken?

“mmmm Yea, btw, just that you know Mia, was the one who broke it” , he guffawed looking at Mia.

“Yea maybe you should keep your hands to yourself Ken”, she walked out of the room.

“You what ken??? Oh no no no don’t tell me, did you, you guys?? Eeee, did you try snogging her? Hahhahaha, is that how that pendant broke, did she slap you” , Nay burst into fits of laughter.


*******
She couldn’t remember having slept more peacefully than she had in these few weeks.

******

Ronald was bent over the table looking closely at the pictures of the victims. He had jotted down the following on the board: Eye, left hand – 8, near right, U. he picked up the shiny silver. He knew it was dropped there recently, as it did not have traces of dirt on it. But it was found at a distance which couldn’t correspond directly with the murder as well.

*****

“This is your Favorite place?” she looked enquiringly at Kenneth.

“Yea, no one to disturb us, and especially at this time of the hour, no one.” He smiled at her

“you wanna walk a little into the woods”, he held out his hand. She ignored him and walked into the woods, and stopped when she reached a big boulder, she sat on it and looked around “it’s a bit eerie in here, actually”

“But your presence makes it beautiful Mia” , he knelt in front of her, and took her hands in his and kissed them. She jerked her hand away from his, and stood up and started walking away, when he pushed her gently  towards a tree, and started kissing her. She tugged at him in an effort to get away and held onto his chain, and pushed him, breaking the pendant as she did so. She slapped him hard, and started walking back, leaving him staring after her.


****

Ronald had always found the ‘New Gen’, as they preferred being called, adept in taking ‘shorter routes’, literally. They were attracted to ‘easy money’ opportunities, faster modes of transport, Short texts, even the language was cut down. He had seen Miasha making use of such terms when he accidentally went through her phone. He couldn’t make head or tails of the messages that she received – ‘w8 i'll b in a min’ or the ‘lol’ or ‘lmao’. He was hoping his daughter wasn’t part of anything illegal. It was later that he understood that she was a part of the ‘next gen’ and these were a new way to communicate – and totally legal at the same time.

***
Ronald knew he had to take a break his time He was working for 72 hours straight , and was in need of some rest. He instructed his team to take few hours off. Ronald headed home and relaxed at the very thought of snuggling into his bed.

He had other reasons as well. It had been a long time since he was aroused. Her calm demeanor and talks had made him all the more eager to head In  her direction. He could almost smell her, and feel her soft body against his. He smiled.

***

Gerald was still working on case. His eyes darted between the pictures and the board where Ronny had written down the clues. He positioned himself in front of the board, and walked back two steps. He took the three pictures, and sat down on a chair facing the board. Were the eyes placed on the slab to give away a particular location?, or was it just as Ronny stated a part of the ‘Scavenger hunt’.

Gerald walked to the cupboard and took out a map of the town. It showed every small lane and shops and was even more precise than an image a satellite could offer. He sat back on the chair, and placed the map on the ground; he parted his feet and bent down towards the map, marking the first place on it. The eyes he thought, he scribbled ‘Eye’ on his notepad, and tried to look at the direction as to which it was placed. There had to be a reason or it to have been placed on the slab, he had argued with Ronny.

He turned the map around, and focused more clearly on the direction the eye was placed as though ‘looking’ at something. ‘Hmmm, that’s kinda funny’, he said aloud, running his hand along the nape of his neck. He always felt funny around the nape when he was closing in on a case. The eye was facing a row of houses; one of them belonged to Ronny. Was it was too much of a coincidence?

***
She gingerly walked through the graveyard, holding herself tightly across her chest. She looked too fragile, like a leaf about to fall off. She joined the gathering to mourn the death of Mike Newton. One more and the town would be clean. She wrapped her shawl tightly around herself, and looked at the sky, a smile escaped her lips but it did not reach her eyes. It got lost between her lips and the bridge of her nose.

***


Gerald wasn’t sure whether he should inform Ronny about it. Was he just making assumptions but it was too much of a coincidence to be just an assumption. He remembered Ronny making fun of him when he had in earlier cases cited similar thoughts, it made Ronny refer to Gerald as a “Wuss”. Did he want to be called a ‘Wuss’ again?. He wasn’t sure of that, but he was sure of one thing – this time Ronny was in trouble!.

Gerald hadn’t come to figuring out what the ‘clues’ meant. However, when he placed all of the  3 murders together, they somehow seemed to point out to Ronny. The second murder wherein the hand was cut of was placed, and what later seemed , was forcefully pointed in the direction of the small row of houses, where Ronny lived. Similarly the 3rd victim, on whom a ‘U’ was etched ever so brutally was again pointed in the direction of the same row of houses – too much of a coincidence!!

****
‘You heard about Mr. Newton Mia? ‘

‘Hmmm yea’

‘You know after what Yasmin told me about him, he deserved it, but not so gruesome right?’

‘After what he did to Yasmin, I think he deserved something far more gruesome than that, Nay’

‘What happened Mia, you only call me Nay, when you have something bothering you, are you ok, is it Kenneth?”

‘No love, nothing, I was just reading the papers, that’s all’

‘Hmmm, alright, if anything you know where to reach me don’t you’

‘Yea, at the back seat of Justin’s car’

They both burst out laughing, and said quick byes. Mia replaced the receiver, and smiled thinking about her Best friend.

****

You missed out on one more similarity in three murders. They were all Bastards, who thought little girls could be played with; they robbed us of our innocence behind closed doors, and were revered by society for their services. Not again, and now it’s your turn.

***
Ronald’s car screeched to a halt outside his house. He took a few deep breaths and calmed himself, before entering the house, he did not want his ‘Little girl’ to see her daddy all tired. He opened the door with a huge smile.” Love I’m ho...” The words got stuck in his throat.

***
1 day later

Gerald knew he had to inform Ronny of this. He picked up the necessary documents and rushed to his car.

***
Gerald called Miasha on her cell phone. He did not know how to break the news to her. But he had to. He remembered her when she was around 5 years old, running towards him wither arms wide open in a pink dress, her blonde hair bouncing and gleaming in the sun. He had seen her change after her Mom’s death, and had seen her grow into a beautiful woman, but all to quiet for her age.

‘Mia, this is Gerald, could you please come over to your home’

‘Sure Uncle Gerald, is everything alright?’

‘Hmmm, come over, I need to talk’

‘Ok , I’ll be there soon’

***
After Ronald Pascoe’s Murder, a sudden fear gripped the town. No one was safe. If the chief was murdered in his own House, who was to be safe? Gerald asked for a transfer after 6 months of trying to figure out who was behind all of it. Miasha left citing further studies. The town sympathized with her, she lost her mother when she was around 12, and now she lost her Dad as well. She promised Nay-nay that she would be in touch. Nay-nay knew it was better to let go than hold on to her.

***
8 years later….

Miasha was working as the Chief Head - Homicide with the FBI. She was strong, independent, fierce, and like her subordinates cited ‘The Hot Bitch’. There was not a case that wasn’t solved under her.

Following a government law, many old cases were being reopened. 10 of them landed on her desk, as she sifted through them, an odd expression clouded her face. She was looking at a file that read “Important”. She knew that case like the back of her palm. It had taken away her Dad.

She still remembered the day when she was asked to come home by Uncle Gerald. No sooner had she reached her house than she saw it being covered by the cops, a number of people ran in and out of the house, an ambulance sounded in the distance. A yellow police tape “Keep out” was being plastered around her house. She was confused as to what was happening. She sighted Uncle Gerald, and walked across to him.

‘Where’s is dad, uncle, and what’s happening here’

‘Miasha, Ronny was murdered’

Gerald couldn’t comprehend the look on her face. It was as though a small smile waiting to break out but suddenly it was reminded by a strict teacher that it was not his turn. Gerald was not good with woman, so he just let it go. He held on to Mia, and did not allow her to be a spectator of the brutal murder.

Mia was happy that Uncle Gerald was not all that smart.

***
She waited for Ronald Pascoe to come back home. Earlier when she spoke with him, she knew how he felt. He said that calm woman attracted him. That was what he had told her the first time he felt her without her consent. he wanted her to be calm, and let him inside her. She cried and begged him to stop, but he was an animal and did not stop.

It became a regular routine now; she cried for her mom, she cried and asked God to help her. But no one listened to her.

She hid behind the covers, and pulled it to her face, hoping that the nightmare would finish off even before it starts off. She heard the familiar sound of the boots across the floor. The closer they came, the stronger she held onto her blanket, tears streamed down her face, her eyes screamed for help, but not  a sound escaped her lips, the door opened and she welcomed her nightmare.

She knew she had to stop it she knew she had to be strong. But showing her strength earned her many bruises. That’s when she realized she had enough, and she Planned something for him, and many others, who were just like him.

No one saw Miasha among the crowd, and even if they did, they would have smiled and greeted her. She was a known figure among the locals. They would have assumed her to have come, to pay her respects to a man who was brutally murdered. She smiled as Simon Andrews was lowered into the ground. May the worms feed o your testicles, and may they touch every part of your body, just like you touched every other girl, who came to your house for Math tuition.

The murders kept Ronald away from home. She couldn’t remember having slept more peacefully than she had in these few weeks. Se knew how she could make them a continuous part of their life.

Ronald on the other hand hadn’t been home for the past two days, and was worried about Miasha, but she assured him that she would take care of herself, and wished him luck for the case. A smile spread across his face, it ironed out the creases on his forehead. He suppressed his desire as soon as it had started surfacing. He knew he had to get back Home and feel Miasha’s body against his. ‘ Gerald i'm sure there is something that links all of them together ‘ Miasha smiled as she hung up on him . Sure Dad there is.

You missed out on one more similarity in three murders. They were all Bastards, who thought little girls could be played with; they robbed us of our innocence behind closed doors, and were revered by society for their services. Not again, and now it’s your turn.

She knew it was time, she had finished off with Simon, Ian was the local old man who would invite kids to his house and fondle them, ad Mike had gone  a step further and raped Yasmin, his Grand daughter. Yasmin was never the same again, and Mia knew what it may have been. Yasmin confided in Mia and Nay, and asked them to not let anyone know.

It’s time for you Dad. She called him and asked him to come home and rest. Ronny never felt happier.

Ronald knew he had to take a break his time He was working for straight 72 hours, and was in need of some rest. He instructed his team to take few hours off. Ronald headed home and relaxed at the very thought of snuggling into his bed.

He had other reasons as well. It had been a long time since he was aroused. Her calm demeanor and talks had made him all the more eager to head in her direction. He could almost smell her, and feel her soft body against his. He smiled.

Miasha gingerly walked through the graveyard, holding herself tightly across her chest. She looked too fragile, like a leaf about to fall off. She joined the gathering to mourn the death of Mike Newton. One more and the town would be clean. She wrapped her shawl tightly around herself, and looked at the sky, a smile escaped her lips but it did not reach her eyes. It got lost between her lips and the bridge of her nose.

 She waited for Ronald to come back home.

Ronald’s car screeched to a halt outside his house. He took a few deep breaths and calmed himself, before entering the house, he did not want his ‘Little girl’ to see her daddy all tired. He opened the door with a huge smile.” Love I’m ho...” The words got stuck in his throat.

He saw her standing in front of him in a negligee. He failed to notice how her body had developed over the years. She had a very sensuous body which flirted with him in a black negligee, hat barely covered her. He was aroused, and she knew it. She smiled.

She glided towards him and gingerly took out his gun from his holster. He closed his eyes ready for the pleasures that awaited him. She ripped him off his uniform, and allowed him to touch her. She pushed him towards the kitchen, where she had designed his fate. Something pricked him , but he let that thought go. He was a man with needs that had to be fulfilled, and he liked the ‘game’ she had in mind.

Ronald couldn’t feel her around him and opened his eyes, to see her smiling at him from a distance. He felt groggy and smiled back. “Meeeeeaaaaa”, he stuttered, the words incoherent. She felt Rohypnol could have been avoided. But it was needed. He stirred. He felt a piercing pain.

‘Hey Ronny, how do you feel? Here take a look at yourself “she said, and placed a mirror in front of him.

“you know what the clues meant, “I hate u and the last bit is DAD”, Ronald couldn’t understand what she was saying as he tried to focus on the mirror in front of him. He was bleeding profusely. He tried to get up , but was pulled back again. He was tied down to the floor.

‘It won’t hurt Daddy, I Promise. just like it never hurt me’

Ronald eyes bulged in horror when his daughter’s words started making sense. He tried to force himself free, but he couldn’t, he felt weak. He had lost a lot of blood.

“Daddy, you know what the clue to the murders was she piped again”

“Mia, let go of me..’

“The Eye stands for the alphabet “I” ", she cut across" the second with the hand cut into eight pieced stands for h8, daddy are you listening it means hate, isn’t that cool???, and then ‘u is Y O U.”

Mia walked towards her Dad and slit his throat. “I hate you Dad”

****

Saturday, August 04, 2012

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He placed his jacket on his left arm, and placed his glasses firmly on his nose, and pulled his pants, as they hung loosely on his thinning figure. He stood there listening to the sound of the waves splashing across the sand; the sounds of innocent chatter, and laughter filled his ears. He smiled and closed his eyes to the setting sun. He lived that minute and knew how it was going to end.

***

He drove into the driveway, and reminisced of the first time he saw her. A smile gently lit up his wrinkled face. The lines gave away his age. He stamped on the brakes and slowly wheeled the age old Toyota into the garage. He picked up her favorite bunch of white roses, from the seat. He let himself in the house very stealthily, but one could not blame him, he never made a sound.

“…… and i'm sure i’m running out of it …. “ she laughed and turned around, and was startled when she saw her husband standing with a bunch of roses.

“Phew, you almost gave me a fright Andrew, when did you come”, she stammered away.

“Ummm, yea, i'll uhhhhh call you back”, she placed the phone on the table, and looked enquiringly at her husband.

He went across and kissed her forehead, and sat down in his usual chair , and waited as she poured him coffee , and started making him a sandwich.

“I was talking to Keith…..” she mumbled, not bothered with the mess she was creating on the table. She splattered mayonnaise, on the table cloth, and looked in her husband’s direction. He seemed totally oblivious to the mess.

“I hope he is doing great, do pass on my regards to him”… he smiled, and devoured the sandwich, and got ready for his charade of pruning and watering the garden.

***
His life was a routine that she could easily recite; there was never a change except for guests, occasions, and the occasional outings. He was a man who would get up on the same side of the bed, wake up at an exact hour every day, leave for work at the same hour. But today something about him was different. She wondered whether he did hear her conversation .She dismissed that thought, till she saw him drag the chair at the study, and write out something. He placed it in two envelopes and sealed it, and placed it a rusty old drawer. He kissed her on her forehead, wished her goodnight, and went off to sleep.

She had no clue as to what that letter contained and was not bothered about it in the slightest.

The charade started off early morning, with the only addition of him taking the two envelopes and placing it inside his jacket.

The vehicle coughed under his coercion to wake it up from its slumber, and finally gave in. He waved as he drove away. He stopped at the nearest Post office and dropped the letters. He smiled to himself, and headed towards the beach – where he first saw her.

He still remembered that scene vividly, her strolling across he beach, with her hands crossed across her chest. He stood mesmerized by her presence. A few enquiries here and there gave away her background. He was aware that her family was facing a financial crisis, and that they would be happy to have her married off to a suitable suitor. He knew it had to be her, or no one else, and the rest they say is ‘History’ they were married .He was a “happily ‘married man.

Keith was one of her best friends, whom she started talking to again after 5 years of their marriage. He was back in town, and they rekindled their friendship. Andrew was happy to see that Simone was happy to have found her friend back.

Andrew and Simone were blessed with a baby girl after 7 years of marriage.

****

Andrew removed his shoes rolled up his pants and started walking on the beach. He walked a mile and sat down recollecting the conversation…

“I know Keith, its about time, I have been living with him for 20 years and I had it, even the arsenic seems to not show any effect on him”, she placed her hand on her hips “yes I did love, it said slow poisoning, but I never thought it would be so slow, but tomorrow, i’m increasing the dosage, which would make it seem like he had a stroke”

“Oh Sasha, is just fine, she has your eyes” she giggled

Andrew had wound up early from work, and had come home directly. He stood there and listened to her end of the conversation.

“I miss you Keith, and yesterday, mmmmm”, she couldn’t sop blushing “I can’t wait any longer … mmmm …. You have loads of patience, and i’m sure i’m running out of it”

Andrew sighed deeply. He still remembered his doctor saying that they could never a child. HE had a problem, he never told her. He did not say anything when she told him that they were pregnant. And today he knew what was in store for him.

Andrew loved Simone from the first time he set his eyes on her; to the first time he knew that she was having an affair with Keith, and every time when she lied to meet him, and even when she decided to kill him. He preferred Death to come from her, than from anything else. He was ready.


He stood watching the last sunset of his life. He placed his jacket on his left arm, and placed his glasses firmly on his nose, and pulled his pants, as they hung loosely on his thinning figure. He stood there listening to the sound of the waves splashing across the sand; the sounds of innocent chatter, and laughter filled his ears. He smiled and closed his eyes to the setting sun. He lived that minute and knew how it was going to end...


3 weeks later :

Simone received two letters. The first was from their family lawyer, the second from Andrew.Their lawyer was surprised as to how Andrew had changed his will, a day before his death.After skimming through the condolence message, Simone read the change in the will. Andrew had divided his property and assets equally between Sasha and Simone, and Simone was appointed as the legal custodian till Sasha turns 18.

She opened Andrews letter : "Just in case she decides to not have you around".



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Wednesday, August 01, 2012

Opaque (Part II)




She hid behind the covers, and pulled it to her face, hoping that the nightmare would end even before it starts . She heard the familiar sound of the boots across the floor. The closer they came, the stronger she held onto her blanket, tears streamed down her face, her eyes screamed for help, but not  a sound escaped her lips, the door opened and she welcomed her nightmare.

                                             **************

Miasha’s Dad was a cop and a damn good one. Ronald Pascoe was one of the finest, as they liked to call him. There was not a case that he couldn’t solve. He was smart, intelligent, and a single parent, who had painstakingly and skillfully brought up his only daughter.

He was appointed to look into the gruesome murder, which shocked the locals. Media lapped up all the details, citing police inefficiency for lack of evidences or any lead about the murderer. All this added to more pressure and unlimited hours of work for the cops.

                                             *************

“Mia, I think you should call him, what’s the harm in meeting up with him” crooned nay-nay, as she broke loose from Justin’s embrace and headed over to Mia. “He is not a bad catch, let me tell you that, and he likes you, you should call him”, she said snatching the book from Mia’s hand, and demanding her undivided attention.

“Nay-nay, I am not interested in him, and moreover he seemed like a jerk, than someone all so nice…”

“Oh c’mon and stop thinking like your dad, you don’t have to x-ray everyone, I say you go and meet him, that’s it” .

                                             *************

The cops were still trying to find out details of the first murder when another shook them up completely. The second murder shook the small town as well. They were getting edgy and demanded concrete answers from the cops. This was more brutal than the first. The victim was murdered and his hands were cut off, they were found around 50 mtrs from the body.  The victim’s left hand was cut into eight pieces and was placed along with the right hand.

“There has to be a reason for the arrangement of the hands in that particular manner, Gerald”, said Mr. Pascoe. “Any leads on the first murder?”

“No Ronny, all background search completed, no enemies, no debt, no family quarrels, he is as clear as water. His wife died 10 years ago. No kids. There is nothing to suggest any bad blood here.”

“Then why was his left eye found resting on a stone slab?” That was a question that no one had answers to.

                                         *************

“Let’s all bow our heads and pray for the soul of Simon Andrews. A man whom we all loved. May his soul find peace and may he rest in the lord’s company in heaven. In the name of the father, and of the son and of the holy spirit”

“Amen”, the church chorused

No one saw her among the crowd, and even if they did, they would have smiled and greeted her. She was a known figure among the locals. They would have assumed her to have come, to pay her respects to a man who was loved and who was brutally murdered.

                                         ***********

“It has to be a man , maybe in his late twenties, tall, and well built, considering our victim Simon, to have been very fit and athletic, our murderer should have been a good match.” Gerald said looking at Ronald

“Or someone who Simon knew only too well”, said Ronald, as he forced his eyes shut. There was something that he was missing out, and he knew it was staring him in his face. He hadn’t been home for the past two days, and was worried about Miasha, but she assured him that she would take care of herself, and wished him luck for the case.

A smile spread across his face, it ironed out the creases on his forehead. He suppressed his desire as soon as it had started surfacing.

“Victim 2 – Ian brown, 45 years old, unmarried. Ronny do you feel that the two cases are linked?? Ian has a clear background as well. His last call was made to a grocery store to refill his monthly supplies. He lived a quiet life.”

“Gerald what is common between the two cases?”

“The fact that both the victims were middle aged and living alone”

“Exactly !!!, and what is the advantage that the murderer has in such cases?”

“No one to pursue the case”

“Spot on, round up similar cases, middle aged men with no living relatives and give me a list, if this is case of a serial killer, he is in for a ride.” He smiled “and also I want to see the pictures of the victims, something tells me that our killer is playing a small game of hide and seek with us, but is also leaving us clues, to reach him.”

“Why would you say that”

“Mr. Andrews was brutally murdered , here have  a closer look”, he pushed a picture towards Gerald "our killer decided on writing something on the victims chest and decided against it, if you can see the mark here”, he pointed at the victims chest “So our killer, stops right there and thinks it apt to pull out his eye and place it on  a stone slab, to make it more obvious. So this picture here, has something more to tell us, and we need to figure out what that is”.

                                         **********

“So your dad’s a cop huh”, asked Kenneth

“Yea, and how does that matter?” she snapped back at him "Seems like you were trying to learn more about me in the past few weeks, homework well done, I must add” she mock patted him on his back, and looked away.

If he was uncomfortable, he didn’t show it, and did a great job at hiding it. “ So I heard your dad is the main officer working on the Murder cases, has he had any leads yet, any evidences leading to the killer”

This time she looked at him, and looked closely, she shifted in her seat “I’m sure the papers are giving away enough information, why are you trying to get more? How does this case interest you?”

He looked away, unable to stand her gaze” I was just curious”, he rambled off.


to be continued

Monday, July 30, 2012

Opaque (Part I)





“He is soooo cuteeeeee and really simple and very loving and caring… and...” she purred, unable to hide her disgust at her friend’s lack of interest...
“And he would want to get into your pants, and say, that this is not working” she stated without blinking.

Naiara and Miasha were friends from as long as they could remember. They had been soul sisters, and had been together for 24 years. Each knowing the other like the back of their hand.

“Mia, why are you being so neg about him?, you haven’t even met him, and moreover, it’s not like he is a despo as such ….. “

“Yea  nay-nay, absonfreakinlutely true, wasn’t this what you said about the last ummm , oh yea 9,no sorry 8 guys you were dating?” , she giggled finally, and threw a devilish smirk across at her friend, and ducked in time , as a pillow rocketed towards her.

“Nay”, she giggled , and went over and hugged her friend who was trying very hard to suppress a smile and maintain an angry face at the same time. “ Take your time love, I don’t want you to get hurt” she smiled and pulled away the strands that covered her face.

“Mia, haven’t you ever had the need to be with someone?”  Their expressions and response was such that anyone would know that it wasn’t a question that was asked for the first time. “Yea I have nay-nay, but the only problem is I don’t know how to let Johnny Depp know how I feel”. They burst into uncontrolled fits of laughter.

“So, tell me about him now “ Naiara broke into full details as Mia listened on.

                                          ***********

“It seems like  a work of a professional, detective, so far we have found no evidence against the murderer, no footprints, nothing, not even a strand of hair, it all seems to have been cleared, or this man just fell dead out of the blue sky”

“hmmmm, I need all of his details, family background, work, mistress, debt, etc . clear?”

“yes Sir, we are on it already”

                                            *************

“How long do we have to wait till I get to see him, gosh I hate men who cant be punctual, its so annoying nay-nay” she folded her arms and looked towards the entrance of the coffee shop where they had planned on meeting Kenneth. Nay-nay had begged Mia to come along and meet him, and moreover, nay-nay was the one who liked him, she wasn’t sure about him, and he seemed to be more of the friendly types. She wanted to be sure and hence had asked Mia to come along.

“Why don’t you call him and figure out where he is”, she stifled a yawn, and hid herself behind the newspaper..

“Do they have Johnny Depp naked on the front page, what is it, that you are so obsessed with in the paper”

“An uncle has been brutally murdered, it has been a week, and the cops are as usual clueless about the killer and the motive, the person was found half naked, and is said to have been choked to death probably with …… “

“oh pleaseeeee stop reading, gosh I wonder how you tolerate all this ??? “

“aww, im sorry squeamy, my dad’s a cop , I get to hear all the gore and stuff, so kinda used to it, anyways, did you call him?”

“no he texted, saying he’d be here in 5 mins”

Mia knew she was being watched, she kept the paper aside and glanced ahead, meeting his eye, she hated him the moment she saw him. He smiled at her. She averted her gaze, and looked at her friend staring at the same guy, he was walking towards them, with that ‘annoying’ smile plastered on his face. Mia saw nay-nay, shifing in her seat, absently adjusting her hair. Damn, so this is mr.9.

“heyyyyy ken”, Nay rose from her seat and hugged him “meet my friend Miasha, and Mia, meet Kenneth, Ken”, she said smiling. They both shook hands, and he sat down opposite Mia. She felt a shiver run up her spine, with his gaze fixed on her. He wanted to know more about her, and kept probing her for answers .

“Nay, I need to rush, just remembered I had some work to finish off at berry’s , i’ll catch up with you over dinner ok” She hugged nay and bade them both good bye and was almost at the door when ken called out to her.

“Hey Mia”, he ran over to her, she turned and looked over at nay, “its Miasha, for you, not Mia”, He smirked and ran his hand through his hair, “so Mia, I was headed to the same place as you, and thought it would be great if … “

“no thanks I have my own vehicle …”

“brilliant, you could drop me then” . Nay walked upto them and encouraged Mia to go along with ken, stating that she had some work…

‘Miaaaaaaa I think he has the hots for you’ she texted hastily
‘I thought you had it for him nay’
‘eeeeeee like I did for the previous guys, no no not him , you know how I am, and btw, am going to meet justin’
‘Justin??’
‘yea Justin, the guy who sings in our choir, he is cute ‘
‘fine, whatever, but I hate this Kenneth guy, so whatever’
‘hehehehhe, that's what makes me feel you guys should be together’

Mia read the last text and threw her phone on the backseat of her car, and sighed.

“so Mia” ….

“I already told you its Miasha”

“Mmm yea, so Mia, why are you so stuck up, you need to relax”

“I don’t think I need a bozo like you to tell me what I should or shouldn’t be doing, where exactly do you want me drop you?”

“Right here”

She slammed the brakes and waited for him to get out

“Mia, maybe when you cool off a bit, I would like to meet you again, only if you want to…it may seem strange to you, but I  like you, I don’t have reasons for the same, but I do. This is my number; i'll wait for your call”

He got off and walked over to the pavement and hailed a cab and took off.

to be continued ..... 

Sunday, July 15, 2012

Wings of Silence


Wings of Silence

Author : Shriram Iyer



About the Author : Bangalore-born Shriram Iyer, a management professional based in Melbourne, Australia, has authored several short stories, theatre scripts and screenplays for short films. Silver-medalist under the Shankar’s International Award in 1996 given by the President of India, Shriram is also a professional singer who has to his credit an Indian pop album, Is Dhundh Mein, (released in 2007 by well-known singer Shankar Mahadevan) as well as over 400 concerts in India, Australia, New Zealand and USA. Wings of Silence is his debut novel.


"A spellbinding story...the real winner in this exhilarating but tender tale is unconditional brotherly love that Shriram Iyer describes in mesmerizing and elegant prose." - Oswald Pereira, Bestselling Author, The Newsroom Mafia.


I cannot really wipe out the smile on my face, even when I sit to review this book. You know there are certain books that you just skim through and it doesn’t really make you happy and then there is “Wings of Silence”, which makes you respect relations, understand certain intricate details in relationships, and communicate without language.

So to start of with we are given a glimpse of Ajay Sethi, an ex Air India official, who was captured and imprisoned in line of duty, and later how he escapes with an injured leg. Here we can easily picture a man of few words, bound by discipline and duty , to whom “Failure” is a word he omitted from his life.

His two sons : Saurav Sethi and Raj Sethi, take the story forward. Raj, the eldest ,is born deaf, owing to which he has a difficult childhood, as compared to an ordinary child, or rather as compared to his younger brother Saurav Sethi, or the one with  a “Midas touch”.

Saurav becomes the son his Father dotes on, as he epitomizes Strength, courage, determination, ambition, focus – all what his father set his life by. The brothers are as different as chalk and cheese, and the same is well described by the author, with a description of their rooms, which in a way described their life’s.

Saurav, grows up to be the next Tennis Star, and in the meanwhile his brother is left out in the rat race. His father completely dotes on him and spends his “Life” completely dedicated towards his sons “tennis career”, whereas he completely ignored his elder Son’s need for acceptance.

As situations unfold, the brothers bond emotionally, and Saurav takes it upon himself to resurrect his Brothers Life, which was crumbling down, much to the annoyance of his father. He helps Raj become the Person Raj aspires to be, by being his constant support and guide. He is helped in this ambition by his “soulmate” Shalini, and his aunt Sheela.

Shriram Iyer has beautifully unfolded a Family for us through the pages of his book. A family with characters that will make you laugh, cry, and empathize with. Characters  you would be able to relate with.

His style of writing is such that it enables for a fast paced read. Events have been well researched. The triumph of the characters feels like a personal triumph for the readers.

Having said all of this , if you ask me what was it that I did not like about the book, id say (a very personal desire) , I would have been happy if all the characters got what they wanted. But well, in reality , that is something that would have been inappropriate. Are you wondering what im talking about??? If Yes, grab a copy of “Wings of Silence” , because this is one “hell of  a book”, and I would absonfreakinlutely want YOU to read it.

 For the AUTHOR, Hats off sir, for a fist timer, you are simply “Rocking”, awaiting your next book.

Oh and my Rating: 10/10 . (like you didn’t know it already)


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Saturday, June 30, 2012

Two Minutes

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He told me of yellow flowers and meadows without boundaries,
Of cattle’s and farms and a dream,
Where I was his and he was “the one made for me

Do you believe in love?? Do you feel it exists?? The typical “kahin na kahin , koi na koi, kissi ke liye bana hai types?? I did not till I met him

It was not love at first sight, there were no violins playing or any sort of signs, that the heavens are assumed to put in front of you, stating that he is the one. Nothing!!!. Just a casual hello, a cordial smile, some conversations over coffee, and a good bye. There wasn’t an urge to see him or hear from him again.

But somewhere, somehow, there was a feeling, a feeling of having known him earlier, a feeling that connected them both on a different level altogether. Was it love?? No not yet.

His company put her at ease,
They laughed over things that only they could understand,
The felt complete in each others presence
And yet , they were not in love.
Silence between them was comforting
There was no awkwardness
They could discuss about the stars and the moon
And about the shapes made by the clouds..

It was beautiful, yet undefined
Were they in love?? well not yet.
Their conversations unfolded their past,
Something which they never spoke about,
Was out for the other to hear.
Their fingers touched
And longed for each other
Yet they were not in love.
Their hands entwined themselves
And their eyes found each others,
A million questions fluttered through them, before their lips met
The questions were left unanswered, yet they had their answers
Somehow, they still were not in love.

Her eyes bore his stories
She was confused beyond words, of why he made her feel this way
His mere presence made her happy
His proximity to another female made her green with envy
And yet they were not in love.

Milte hain hum juda hone ke liye
Milte hain hum juda hone ke liye,
Uss gham main bhi ek alag sa nasha hai,
Kyunki uske har alfaz main tumhara naam hai.

They spent days together, and now it was time to leave,
A feeling of loneliness crept inside her,
But she wanted to be strong and pretend,
She hugged him good bye
And thought she would get over him
But she was wrong
As her every thought was going back to him.
And yet she was not in love.

She dreamed of yellow flowers and meadows
She dreamed of being there with him
She was afraid of being hurt,
And realized it was the same for him,
He had many plans,
And she was nowhere in them
She was hurt to realize , that maybe it was only she who was in love with him.

Of flowers and meadows,
Of cattles and farms
A dreadful night, and it all came crashing down.
He was to go far away from her, far away from this world
As death sought his soul
She ran towards him,
And held him in her arms.
“I love you”, she whispered in his ears
Their eyes met, their fingers entwined
She prayed for two minutes more of his life.
Death bowed before her love, and granted them 2 decades
But they still were not in love.
They were in something beyond,
Beyond something
That even love couldn’t comprehend.


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Wednesday, May 23, 2012

"Love aaj Kal"




Many eyes looked at the couple, who were lost in each others eyes, oblivious to the world. They held on to each other, unaware of the glances and smirks.






“oooh, im gonna watch it soon” crooned a girl, staring like the rest, at the Movie Poster.
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